Saturday, January 31, 2009

Write the story




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  1. Picture 4

    Once upon a time, there were three brothers named Julio, Marco, and they were always together playing and doing stuff little kids do. Their mother was always telling them to calm down and to behave better because they were always climbing trees and running everywhere.
    They were always falling from the tall trees they had in their backyard, and their mother was always very worried because they didn't obey her, and she was afraid that someday one of her sons would fall form one of the trees.
    One day they were playing in their big tree they had in their backyard, while their mother was cooking a cake for Julio, the oldest one, who was turning 10 years old that same day. They were pretending they were superman, batman and spiderman, but Julio got involved too much in the character of superman so he tried to fly. He jumped off the tree, the tallest one, and he fell immediately to the floor. That day, the same day of his birthday, Julio died. His mother was really sad, and she felt guilty for not telling them to be careful or to punish them when they didn't obey her and the consecuences were the death of Julio.

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  2. Once upon a time, there was a little boy who wasn’t exactly the most beautiful boy in town. He had a big nose and two little eyes and two enormous ears. He didn’t have friends because none of the boys wanted to be with him. He was a little strange because he felt too bad with himself.

    Once, he was walking from school to his house. When he was passing through a park, some girls where hanging out there. He liked one girl since he was in kinder garden, so he tried to walk the best way he could so the girl could get impressed. Suddenly, he heard the girls telling secrets to each other, so he put attention. He heard his name and heard something he didn’t like at all, he felt really bad so he started running to his house. When he arrived, he started thinking about what the girls where saying and he agreed with them. He was so ugly, none of his friends liked him, so he started thinking it would be a good option if he had a new face. He started imaginating with such intensity of a new face, when he slept. Next day, he was too depressed he barely took breakfast. He went to the park and continued thinking about that, he felt too bad.

    Suddenly, he started feeling his head really heavy, but he didn’t mind that. He wished his face wasn’t there. Then, his head wasn’t exactly in the same position; his head was in the ground. At that point, he felt really bad because he had made his wish come true. And he learned that you have to be careful with what you wish because if you wish it strongly, it may be true.

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  3. I chose the one with the head off

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  4. Picture 3:

    Once upon a time there was a little boy named Adam, who believe he was the happiest boy on Earth. He grew up in a small loving family in the outsides of a very beautiful town. He had a father, a mother, younger sister and an older brother. He had one of the happiest childhoods in the world, but he always knew that he was different from his family and the world.

    Everyone treated him in a special way, though he didn’t like it, he got use to it, but Adam always was wondering why people saw him that way. When he was walking down the street, people stopped by to offer him help, even if Adam was perfectly fine. They always talked to him very slow, like he didn’t understand them.

    One sunny morning, Adam went to the store to get some ham that his mother asked him to bring home. In the way to the store, Adam barely saw a little bright thing in an alley, dumped in pile of garbage. He immediately ran to see the thing and he noticed that the thing was like a glass, but it wasn’t transparent; you could see yourself in it. He forgot the ham and ran all the way to his home. Once he arrived, he showed the strange thing to his family. Then he realized that he was the only one that had a squared-shaped head. He had lived all his life thinking that he was a rounded head like everyone he had ever known since he had memory. All came to sense; he now realized why people treated him in a special way.

    by Jesus Ocejo Gallegos

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  5. very funny story gaby :)
    but I liked more ana's because it's more creative

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  6. In the year 3000 there were two friends named Cesar and Arnoldo they were almost brothers and loved each other. One day they went to a very big partu in a friend's house and they were drinking a lot and chatting with only one beatiful girl, Cesar was talking more with the girl than Arnoldo so Arnoldo was jealous of him and went to his house very angry.

    A few years later without talking to each other Cesar became rhe boyfriend of the girl of the party and were very happy. A few years later Cesar married the girl of te party and went to live to Colorado, but without knowing Arnoldo moved to Colorado too and live in the same neighborhood, but Cesar never knew that they lived in the sme hood.

    So one day Cesar came from the work very late and found Arnoldo in the bed with The girl of the party, Cesar was so so angry that he took him to a nearby river and satrt fighting for hours, but suddenly Cesar took out a big knife and cut the head of Arnoldo and threw it to the river, he was so happy that he died, that he lived very happy with his wife the girl ofthe party.

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  7. jesus i do not like your story beacuse it was boring:)

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  8. Anagaby i like a lot your story beacuse it was very funny and i entertained a lot reading it:D:D:D:D:D

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  9. Cesar i liked your story because you got a girlfriend :D JAJAJ xD

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  10. The story of this picture is about 2 kids that were walking in the street, but the thing is that one boy kick a football ball and hit the face of one of the kids.
    Unfortunately the boys head fell down from his neck, it looked very awful, it was like a horror movie. All the neighbors looked at him.
    But don’t worry his head was paste back a

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  11. jesus your story is very boring !! and i loved analee's

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  12. jesus i like your story i dont know why :)

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  13. ana and cesar your storys are weird :B !!

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  14. whatever i dont care if you like it or not i was just doing the homework 8o|

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